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Gave the game a go, it is a really interesting visual novel, as far as my opinion goes the characters, world building, art and music are all A+.

The humor was great, there is really good bits sprinkled all over the game as well as the plotwist that, even when they are to be expected still work well with the story and don't feel forced at all.

Keep the good work!

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This is one of the best visual novels ive ever played, thank y'all for making this! Absolutely amazing writing.

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The writing for this game is seriously incredible. Gosh, I just have to see more. The story grabbed me from start to finish, with all it's creeps and action and light dashes of cheeky humor. I'm so happy I read it!

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This is seriously captivating, I’d love to explore this world again sometime

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I was enthralled from start to finish. Pretty much speechless now. Very good.

Definitely down to follow and read whatever else you end up writing in the future.

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Ugh, you hooked me there ! The contexte gives a really rich array of possibilites and dilemnas.

I wish it didn't stop ! The ending part sounded to me like an inteasing intro to the world, not a closure, arhh :p

I'm totally looking forward for anything you do in the future now ;..; (I'd hope a continuation but... Well I'm just one enthusiast reader wanting for all promising books to never end >_<)

Best VN world idea I had yet to see. I can see so much lore question, interpersonal, and social problems crawling all around behind ~.

You did all yourself ? Darn impressing. Characters were very cute. I didn't dig much the soundtracks but I've awefull tastes anyway so you shouldn't mind that.


Thanks for the game !

Thank you for your comment! The game is a product of four people, I just wrote it. Our names are in the description on the page and in the about section in the game!

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Ho, oopsie

I just read the "more information" bit at the bottom of the page where you were the only one featured. In a sense I feel relieved : it seemed to be superhuman to have all of the skillset ^^'

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Still going 2020 NaNoRenOs and was pleasantly surprised I still had good ones to read. Liked the economic writing that keeps the story and action moving, fitting artstyle, and a fitting soundtrack with good variety. I appreciated both endings and how the bad end plays with the title. My only suggestions/personal preferences are cosmetic: different font, color-coded nametags, All in all, great work and I look forward to future endeavors!

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After the Package Chat I was really happy to see you made a game for NeNoRen0 and it didn't disappoint. You really have a talent for creating vivid worlds while never overdoing exposition or losing the focus on the characters. It also got really intense by the end and I'm still kind of dazed by it. Game jam VNs often fail to make that strong of an impression or give me this much to think about with 5 times the text. Please never stop making these. ^^

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I really enjoyed this VN! The art is beautiful, and I like the world you created. I'm planning on playing your other game once I play all of the NaNo releases I'm interested in, and I'd love to see more from you in the future. (:

Thank you for your comment! The other one is a lot less technically-competent than this one as it was just me making it. I hope you manage to find some enjoyment in it, nevertheless!